Monday, November 5, 2012

10 min in class writing

Detective:
 I arrived on scene at 11:33am, I walked up to the crime scene to see that a male approximately in his mid to late twenties had what looks to have been murdered. I started my investigation and noticed that there were some thing in the scene that just did not add up. The victim still had all of his belongings so I c ruled out robbery, but what I did notice is the ring he had around his right wrist, almost as if he had been handcuffed to something. After further investigation I discovered that the man was an ex mob boss from Boston. Now the question was why was he here in this little town and how did he end up dead in a parking garage.
Coroner:
After arriving on scene I found a white male approximently 25 years of age lying face up on the secound floor of the downtown parking garage. The victim had multiple stab wounds and heavy bruising around his right wrist. Also bruising on the face possible struggle, from what I have found the victim was killed at at 6:35am.
Attorney:
Ladies and gentlemen what we have here is a case of cold blooded murder. We have found that this ex mob boss was murdered by one of his opposing mobs grunts. He was trying to hand off all of the information that he had on this other mob to the new boss. We have all of the evidence to back this case. 

1 comment:

  1. You my friend may have taken this a little to far, however I like it. I like how the victom had to be a male. A female would never do such a thing! Women could be a mob boss I suppose, I mean why not women do everything anymore. Anyways I'm taking avantage of your post to get some more in! Im not sure what to write about, but I did enjoy your case it sounds very brutal! I like it, I like it a lot! God.... This sucks! oh well I'm still here just taking avantage of you posting this, and now babbeling to get a word count. I guess I could go on to tell you about my future, and you can tell me what you think in a comment to one of my post. Well ill make a nother comment explaining everyting so go check out other ones. The moral of this short story is that I have the option to quit my job or quit school for now. I chose my job simply for the fact I enjoy it, and decent paying ones are hard to come by anymore. I hope I chose the right thing.

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